There's a large variety of camera angles and slight use of omniscient narration when the purple scarf is tossed onto the bed. To improve I'd suggest trimming the shots to make it run smoothly, possibly by lining up the match-on-action. I'd also recommend editing the sound a bit.
I like the way you have introduced the main character and you have deffinately set the scene for the film as a chick flick. Good use of POV shots when she's putting on her make up.
To improve this, perhaps edit the sounds so as to make it a smooth transition between the voice over and then back to the diagetics.
I really liked the start it makes you want to watch more of the full movie, the voice over is really effective, all id say is make it a little longer as it stops very suddenly well done :)
I liked it and I feel like the voice over works effectively. Who is the guy actor? he's really hot :) You need to work on the sound however as the wind is very loud punch a goose
There's a large variety of camera angles and slight use of omniscient narration when the purple scarf is tossed onto the bed.
ReplyDeleteTo improve I'd suggest trimming the shots to make it run smoothly, possibly by lining up the match-on-action. I'd also recommend editing the sound a bit.
I like the way you have introduced the main character and you have deffinately set the scene for the film as a chick flick. Good use of POV shots when she's putting on her make up.
ReplyDeleteTo improve this, perhaps edit the sounds so as to make it a smooth transition between the voice over and then back to the diagetics.
I really liked the start it makes you want to watch more of the full movie, the voice over is really effective, all id say is make it a little longer as it stops very suddenly well done :)
ReplyDeleteI liked it and I feel like the voice over works effectively. Who is the guy actor? he's really hot :)
ReplyDeleteYou need to work on the sound however as the wind is very loud
punch a goose